Short Story ^^

The True Love

Teeet teeet teeeeeeet !

School bell has rung, it means that the hour has run out. The students go home hurried to do their own daily activities, and so did Jio. A very handsome boy in 2^nd grade of senior high school with fair skin and tall body. That’s why most all of the girl in his student got crazy of him.

***

“Goooaaal ! Yeaaah . I win !“, shouted Jio suddenly.

“Aaaah i lose again. I’m out !“, answered Rio, Jio’s brother.

“Heey this is only a game. Is that all you have?”, teased Jio .

“Okay . Let ' s play again and I will win this, I swear!”, said Rio.

“Uh I have to go to basketball practice at school . Bye brother”, said jio who were immediately change his clothes and went to school .

When he arrived at school, he met a girl he liked. It’s been a long time that he fell like to her. And now, Jio want to ask her to go hangout together.

“Hi elsy”, said Jio to that beauty girl.

”Hi jio”, answered elsy.

”Can we meet again later after I finished my practice?” , said jio.

“Mmm yes, I can. But where ?”

“How about in front of the school’s gate ?”

“Okay then . I also want to exercise debate first”

”Okay so long”, said jio happily.

It’s five pm now.  Jio were waiting for elsy in front of the school’s gate. He was bring a bundle of flower that will give to elsy.

“Hey, did you have waited for a long time ?” said elsy anxious.

“aah no . I’m just arrived here a few minutes ago,” answered jio.

“I see. So, what is that ?” , asked elsy.

“mmm this is about my feeling. I like you, it’s been a long time. I always tried to learn everything about you . Will you be my girl ?”, said jio while gived the flower.

 “I’m sorry, but I still don’t want to dating. We still young . there are many things that we have to do . but we can be a friend”, answered elsy gently.

“All right . I will wait for you. Whenever you want it, I’ll be there . But please accept this flower” , replied jio at once he hoped.

“Thank you” , said elsy while taked that flower . after that, they went home togother . There seemed a disappointed feeling in Jio’s face. But he also happy because elsy doesn’t refuse him at all. He just thinked that there are many times and chances to get her.

***

2 months have passed away.

Jio and elsy were got closer . They often get in contact and met for study together. Jio felt that elsy loved him actually, she just doesn’t want to dating.

When the result in semester one has out, jio heard a rumor that said elsy was dating with randy , rio’s classmate in the 1^st grade. Heard that , jio want to meet elsy .

“Is that rumor right?”, asked Jio angry.

“What do you mean?”, answered Elsy with dejected.

“Is it true? Tell me the truth”, asked Jio. He was hopefully to heard Elsy’s answer: ‘yes, it is just a gossip’.

“Yes. That’s true. We are in a relationship since a week ago”, answered Elsy with sad face.

“Why? Why? I liked you and I know you liked me too, right? You said that you still didn’t want to get in a relationship first, but why now you're dating with Randy?, “ asked Jio seriously.

“I’m sorry Jio”, answered Elsy short in time. And the she ran away and leaved Jio alone. A glance, Jio saw Elsy’s tears touched her cheeks . Spontantly, Jio send a message to elsy.

I know it's just a lie, right? It’s just your trick to away from me. You know, it dooesn’t matter what happen, I still right here, waiting for you.

No replied from Elsy.

Since that time, Jio and Elsy never talked again. Jio always tried approaching Elsy, but Elsy gived no respect. Increase in class, Elsy planned to move to a foreign country. Heard that, Jio met Elsy.

"Why do you want to move?", asked Jio. But Elsy just kept quiet.

"How about me?", Jio asked again.

"When will you here again?", Jio asked again and again. But elsy still kept quiet. Elsy suddenly hugged Jio and cried. Jio was very confused with what he was facing. After released Jio’s, Elsy went over to a man who turns out, it was RANDY. Jio shocked. 'She will go with Randy? How can…? '. Endlessly he guessed.

"Elssssy, I believe that you are like me. I'll believe in you. I'll be here. It doesn’t matter what happen, remember that", shouted Jio very loudly. And the plane took off.

***

Five years passed.

Now, Jio is studying at a famous university in that town. Sometimes he is still thinking and imagining Elsy. There was never the slightest feeling of another close college friend. NEVER.

Jio always went toElsy’s home to see if  Elsy was home or not. Until one day he was home Elsy for the umpteenth time, the door was opened. Jio was knocked on the door and said hello. Not long after that, the door was opened. How happy he is when he looked into a person that opened the door, it was Elsy. Jio immediately tightly hugged Elsy.

"Long time no see. You look more handsome now”, said Elsy with little expense. Jio only replied with a wide smile. He could not say anything.

"I'm sure you'll come back. And now you're back. Thank you. I'm very happy ", said Jio with a little bit tears on his cheeks.

"I'm happy too. Do you still trust me? Do you still like me? ", asked Elsy.

"Yes. Of course yes!", answered Jio.

"forget me. I've been married with Randy. You will never understand. I wanna go home now. You will get a better girl than me, trust me, my first love," said Elsy. Elsy closed the door. While Jio was silent. He could not believe what Elsy said. She said that Jio was her first love. FIRST LOVE.

'Elsy married to Randy?', said Jio. Jio scared of it is true. But in other side, believe that Elsy maynot  married with Randy. He believes Elsy just love him.

The next day Randy came to see Jio.

"This is for you", without further ado Randy gave a box to Jio. Jio opened it. And turns in it there are some things that reminded him of Elsy.

"Now there is in the hospital Elsy 'sone' room 25. He had stage 4 brain tumor. That's why he is away from you. He feared that he would only burden the rest of his life. He really loves you ", Randy suddenly talking and making Jio surprised. Without wasting much time, Jio went to the hospital to see Elsy. He saw a girl lying in front him.

            "Now my time is not much else. I'm sorry Jio. I've been upset for years”, Elsy said with tears in her eyes. Jio was unable to hold back his tears. Jio was holding Elsy’s hand.

"Do not talk like that. I know if you like me. but why do not you be honest with me? Why? ", Said Jio.

"When I am died, I hope you will be happy. Happy for me. Promise? ", Said Elsy.

"Please, don’t say that", replied Jio with fear.

"You must promise to me. I believe you, Jio. I love you”, Elsy said. That was the last word from elsy.

"Elssssyyy, wake up! You should not go ", says Jio up feeling very devastated.

"I will always believe in you. I love you too ", says Jio again. Jio kissed Elsy’s forehead of the lifeless.

***

Ten years have passed.

Now, Jio is married with his friend in his college and have a child aged 2 years. Randy who has playacting as Elsy's husband also was married. But he has not had children.

Now, Jio just save memories about Elsy in his mind. But he will always believe in his heart that his true love is Elsy. Though now he already has a wife and a child as handsome as him.

-THE END-

Spoof Text :)

The Naughty Son

Tommy and his mother had holiday to the zoo. Tommy was a naughty boy, he never afraid with animals. One day he wanted to hold a horse. The horse didn’t feel happy and free from him.

Tommy was caught by zoo keepers. Surprised to hear that, his mother went to the information office. His mother was terrified about her son.

The guard came and met his mother and wanted to say. But when the guard wanted to speak, Tommy’s mother said,”Oh sir, please forgive my son, and let we get free”. The guard was laugh and said, “Thank you very much. Because your son had helped to cure the horse from hemorrhoids"

Text Analyzing

Orientation     : Tommy and his mother were holiday in the zoo.

Even 1            : Tommy is a naughty boy and he disturbed the animal.

Even 2             : Zoo keepers caught Tommy.

Even 3             : Tommy’s mother apologized about her son to the guard.

Twist               : Tommy had cured the horse from hemorrhoids.

The Ugly Girl

There was a girl named Ika. Ika fell in love with Reno. Reno is the handsome boy in their school. But Reno never likes Ika. Because Ika is an ugly girl in their school.

She has brown face and messy hair. She wears a big glasses. She looks very ugly.

Ika always give smile to Reno, almost in everyday, every time she meets him. But Reno never to reply it. Ika never surrender to be close with Reno.

One day, Ika followed Reno until his house. Reno was mad because felt very disturbed by Ika.

“Why did you follow me until my house? Remember! You are an ugly girl, I’ll never get fall in love with you! Get out from my house!”said Reno. Reno come in to his house and he closed the door with crass.

Ika didn’t go home and still stayed in front of Reno’s house. Reno was peeking Ika from the window. He looked that Ika was cleaning her face and combed her hair.

Reno was shocking and come out from his house. He looked the beautiful girl in front of his house. He knew that the girl is Ika. Reno came to Ika and said, “I never knew that you are very beautiful. I think I want to be your boyfriend”.

Ika gave a very big smile to Reno and showed her black tooth.

Text Analyzing

Orientation  : There was a girl named Ika.

Even 1         : Ika loves Reno, but Reno doesn’t like Ika.

Even 2         : Ika always give smile to Reno, but Reno never reply it.

Even 3         : Ika followed Reno until his house.

Even 4         : Reno was angry with Ika, but Ika still stay at Reno’s house.

Even 5         : Ika cleaned her face and chance to be a beautiful girl.

Even 6         : Reno wanted to be Ika’s boyfriend.

Twist           : Ika showed her black tooth.

Handphone for My Girl

A young man found some money in the  trash. He was thinking what must  he do with the money. Then, he decided to buy a handphone for his girlfriend. So that, his girlfriend can communicate with each other.

After he bought a new handphone with the simcard, he went to his girlfriend’s house. Arrived in there, he was giving it to his girlfriend. His girlfriend was very happy and grateful to him. His girlfriend saw the contents of the handphone.

"I finally have a phone, too. Thank you my honey “ said the girlfriend.

“You’re welcome" replied the young man with the flat.

“What’s the matter?"

"I feel happy and sad too. Because you have a handphone"

"So why?”

"I'm glad that you can communicate with each other.You can make a status updates on facebook and twitter, play games, and  the others. But I feel sad because I don’t have a handphone".

Text Analyzing

Orientation    : A young man found some money in the trash.

Event 1         : He used that money to buy a new handphone for his girlfriend.

Event 2        : He gave a new handphone to his girlfriend,   so that his girlfriend can communicate to each other.

Twist               : He bought a new handphone for his girlfriend to communicate but he didn’t have handphone.

Take a Walk to The Park

Dolly was playing in his house. His mother was angry to him because he made noise. His mother asked him to take his dog for a walk to the park. His mother said that he had to keep cleanliness. And asked to bring a big plastic bag and a little shovel for his dog’s feces.

“Put the feces in the plastic bag, and don’t be left out any  feces in the park”

“Okay Mom” said Dolly.

When he was arrived in the park he looked many people that take their dog for a walk. Because that day had glorious weather. Suddenly, he looked his dog’s feces and he put it in the plastic bag.

            In the twilight he go home and bring the full plastic bag to his mother and said, “Here is Mom all of dog’s feces in the park. I’m so tired after take the feces from another people’s dog. Huh, Mom is so funny that asked me to put all dog’s feces in the park”.

“Dolly!!!!” his mother was shocked.

Text Analyzing

Orientation    : Dolly was playing in his house.

Event1             : His mother was angry because he mad noise.

Event 2         : His mother asked Dolly to take his dog a walk in the park and asked to put the dog’s feces in the pouch.

Event 3         : Dolly walked in the park and put some dog’s feces.

Twist               : Dolly went home and bring the full pouch dog’s feces that there in the park.

Expression

Pain

Example              :

Ulfah     : Hello all....

All           : Hi...

Ulfah     : What are you doing?

Gina       : We’re surving in the internet

Ulfah     : What happen?

Ruth      : There is a big news...

Tati         : Yes, that’s true

Ulfah     : A New big News ,What is that?, let me  see.., what is that....

Gina       : This is about  Komodo’s  island. It isn’t become the new seven wonders

Tati         : I’ts painful

Ruth      : Yeah, its really painful

Ulfah     : Oh , my god...

Gina       : I really-really hope that Komodo island become the  new seven wonder

Tati         : Me too

Ruth      : I hope this news is wrong

Gina       : Yes , I hope so...

Tati         : Yes , you are right

Ruth      : You know,  I have spent some money for voting on  it..

Ulfah     : Yeah , not only you who has done that , me too

Relief

Example              :

Tati                         : Hei do you know,  to day we are going to go home early.

Ulfah, gina          : Really ?

Ruth                      : Yes of course , Don’t you know?...

Gina                       : Yeah, I didn’t know..

Ruth                      : Oh my God. How pity you are...

ulfah                      : Oh, yeah , yesterday Mrs. Mimi have told  me that  we are going to go  home early

Gina                       : What time will we go home  today?

Ruth                      : It’s about ten o’clock

Ulfah                     : Horray, we aren’t going to have remedial

Tati                         : Yeah you’re right , we aren’t going to have remedial and math’s test

Ruth                      : I feel so relief

Ulfah                     : I’m so relief too

tati                         : Oh , there is one more thing

Gina                       : What’s that...?

tati                         : They said that in there will be no teacher teaching us for our first class today.

Ulfah                    : Really..., yeah hore..., today is a fun day, i feel really Relief.

Gina                       : Horry, let’s start playing

Ruth,ulfah,Gina: Let’s Go....

Pleasure

Example              :

Ulfah                     : Hi guys! Did you have watched harry potter Deathly Hallow Part two?

Ruth,Gina,Tati   : Yes, of course!

Ulfah                     : What do you think about that movie?

Tati                         : I think, it’s really great!

Gina                       : Yeah, I think so. How about you, Ruth?

Ruth                      : I love it. But I also sad because that was the last part of Harry Potter series.

Ulfah                     : Yeah, you were right.

Tati                         : But actually, we still can watch another good movies, such as.. Breaking Dawn,

Right?

Gina                       : I agree with you, Tati. Breaking               Dawn is a great movie too. I love that.

Ulfah                     : Yeah, yeah.. Well guys, I gotta go. I have an English Course now. Byebye!

Ruth,Gina,Tati   : Bye! See ya!

Requesting and Granting requstion

Example              :

Ruth      : Good morning guys!

All           : morning!

Ulfah     : How are you?

Ruth      : I’m fine thankyou

Gina       : Sorry, could you move your body a bit

Tati         : Sure

Ulfah     : Come on sit down here

Ruth      : Thankyou

Ulfah     : How about our English homework?

Tati         : Oh yeah, I forget about that

Gina       : We didn’t do the homework yet

Ruth      : Oh my God come on, let’s do it!

Tati         : Sure, can I use your pen, please?

Ruth      : Of course, you can

Gina       : I’m sorry friends. I don’t have English book. Tomorrow, will you drive me to book store? I

want to buy it there

Ulfah     : Ok. I want to go there too.

T&R        : May we join you?

G&U      : Yes, of course

Conversation about The Expression of Painful, Relief, Pleasure, Requesting and Granting request

In the classroom

G&R       : Good morning!

T&U       : Morning!

Gina       : What are you doing?

Tati         : I’m surving a news in the internet

Ruth      : What happen there?

Ulfah     : Super Junior will come to Pontianak

Gina       : Are you sure?

Ulfah     : Yes. Look at this!

Ruth      : Sorry. Could you move your body?

Tati         : Sure

Gina       : Wow, that’s terrific. I want to buy the ticket

Ruth      : Me too. Will you drive me to go there?

Tati         : OK. When will we go?

Ruth      : Emm.. How about tomorrow?

Tati         : OK

G&U      : May we join you?

Tati         : Sure. What’s in your opinion about the people who want to buy the ticket?

Ruth      : I think tomorrow will be so many people there who want to get the ticket

Gina       : Oh my God. I think it’s very painful!

Ulfah     : But, let me see. On this post there is a web which sold the ticket.

Gina       : Wah.. Thank goodness.

                : How about we buy the ticket there?

Ulfah     : I agree with you

T&U       : We too

The following day...

Ulfah     : Yeay, I’m so relief

Gina       : Really?

Ulfah     : Yes, cause I have the ticket.

Gina       : Ouh.. I haven’t got the ticket.

Tati         : Ouch. How pity you are!

Gina       : Yeah..

Ruth      : It would really help it you did something to me because I haven’t got the ticket too

Ulfah     : OK. I will help you to buy the ticket

Ruth      : Thankyou

After watching the conccert

Tati         : Waw that’s really wonderful

Ruth      : Yes, you are right

Ulfah     : I want to watch it again

Tati         : How about next year?

Gina       : Yes I want to join too

Ruth      : I think I can watch it just for this time

Tati         : Why?

Ruth      : Because the ticket very expensive. It’s killing me

Ulfah     : How pity you are

Gina       : Can I use your handphone for a minutes, please? I want to call my father to pick us up.

Tati         : Of course, you can.

Ulfah     : Don’t be sad. I will help you to get watch it again

Ruth      : Really? Thank’s God for it

Gina       : O yeah, when I was watching the conccert,  I fell, and some people look at me. I feel so shy

Ulfah     : Really?

Gina       : Yeah..

Tati         : Why did you can fall?

Gina       : Many people in back side pushed me

Ruth      : So unlucky you are..

Gina       : Yeah, I’m so shy

Ulfah     : Look at there Gina’s father already come

Gina       : Come on friends!